#WIPJoy Day Five

April 9, 2017

Day 5: Share a line of description.

 

This was a huge challenge.  I love describing things almost as much as I love dialog, so one might say (and some do say) that I have too much description to choose from.

 

I happened to be reading an early chapter this morning, so I grabbed a line from there that I really like.

 

"The circular building swelled out of the peaked roofs of its smaller neighbors like an angry blister, and the thick, greasy smoke that trailed from its many chimneys smelled of melted fat and burned meat."

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